ENGLISH ESSAY HELP????

Arriving to the infirmary without being aware of your prognosis can create a lot of tension between you and your family. In the early spring of 2009, my younger brother had an unbearable lower abdominal pain. The pain escalated to the point where he could no longer walk, talk, or eat. Because his physical and mental state were promptly degenerating, he was rushed to the E.R. to get an emergency surgery. As minutes flew by, my parents' faces grew in worry and were relying on faith that his condition wasn't life threatening, despite the fact that we had to wait an excruciating two hours. The nurse had finally came out and told us that he would be fine but was in critical condition due to appendicitis. He initially started to recover at a quick pace for the first few weeks. Two weeks later, the pain started coming back only to find out that he contracted an infection. Regrettably another surgery had to be taken underway. The fear ociated with this event created a new dilemma. Both of my parents had gone into a deranged state of mind and feared that this could be a recursive problem. I began to think that his dilemma would be inevitable. As I saw the same nurse walk down the aisle, my heart started to pound faster and faster. As soon as I saw a smile on her face, I knew the worse was finally over and fate had once again been on our side. The surgery was quick and painless and he made a full recovery in three weeks. Going to the hospital can be a dreadful experience for you and your family but we must cope with the hardships and be there for one another.